TSATR

TSATR

About the Story

On a humid night in Miami, Ray wakes up in an abandoned stadium to hear desperate calls for help. When he rushes over to the girl calling out, she asks him where she is, to which Ray realizes he has no answer. In fact, the only personal information Ray can remember is his own name, and the same goes for Paula. To make matters even more confusing, suddenly Ray is struck by streams of light--streams of light, he realizes, that are spilling out of the girl's own eyes. A strong sense that they shouldn't ask for help, Paula's blinding eyes, a raven that won't seem to leave them alone, and bizarre tattoos on their left arms--nothing seems to add up, and the two are determined to make sense of their pasts.

Thursday, January 16, 2025

Part 1, Chapter 10

 

X: The File Room

 

              No,” Paula said, grabbing Ray by the arm before he had even made a move towards the doorway.

              Suddenly Hitchcock lighted off Ray’s palm and plunged into the darkness of the hallway, soaring to the very end, where he descended and settled in front of the far doorframe.

              How? How had the door been opened? If it really had been opened by someone else, that meant there was someone out there who knew about the Hole and knew the combination of the door’s lock—maybe the same person who wrote all those awful journal entries. And if that person had indeed been down here recently, that means he would’ve seen all the evidence of them living down there—all their belongings, all the opened packages of food, all their notes on the chalkboard, all their time-keeping marks on the wall.

              Then why hadn’t he done anything about it?

              Ray looked behind him and scanned the main room. Everything was right where it had been: his pillow (disorderly pile of old towels) thrown on one end of the sofa, Hitchcock’s pile of sand in the corner, the bare stick of a mop he’d found at the dumpster leaned against the wall—everything looked untouched.

              Maybe Ray was overthinking it. Maybe it hadn’t been locked in the first place—just jammed. That could be it. And in either case, it wouldn’t be the end of the world for the Hole’s owner to return. It’d be inconvenient having to find a new place to stay, but that’d probably be the end of the ordeal. He shrugged it off—in either case, he concluded to himself, it really was no big deal.

              “Someone could be in there,” Paula said in a hushed voice. She stood firmly in place before the open doorway, arms at her sides, gazing into the darkness.

              “Nobody’s there,” Ray said. He paused for a moment to listen. The hall was silent.

              He took the first step forward into the darkness.

              “I hate you,” Paula growled. She hadn’t moved from the doorway.

              “C’mon, you’ve got flashlight eyes—it won’t be dark once you actually get here. It’s not scary,” he said while he continued down the hall, but the words as they escaped him were robotic and detached from a growing sense of uneasiness he hesitated to admit to himself. As he walked, he kicked up black dust that flitted about before tiring and settling back on the floor. Here the smell of burning and some other vague sour scent were stronger than in the main room, and the air was heavy and stale. The walls were of the same cement as the previous parts of the chamber, but here they were more crudely shaped, with lumps and indentations all along the hall. The ceiling hung low, and as he walked it felt like the corridor shrank and nearly gripped him by the shoulders.

              Finally, Paula strode through the doorway and caught up to him, more likely from a desire to not be alone rather than from a desire to explore what was down the hall. Her steps produced an odd sort of echo in the space that buzzed around his ears before falling away. About halfway down the hall, there was a door left just slightly ajar; but first Ray went to the very end, where Hitchcock was once again frozen before yet another door.

              “He ignored the first door down the hall,” Ray said, puzzled, “and made a beeline for this one, even though it’s further down.” There was a whole mysterious room awaiting his exploration, but still Ray bent down and crouched next to his raven. This time, there was no window through which Ray could see to the other side of the door—but at the very least, he took note that no light streamed through under the door, and here, too, all was quiet. It was unmarked by any intentional engravings or signage, but looked blackened along its bottom edge where it grazed the dark dust on the floor.

              Maybe it was some deep migratory instinct in the raven—some overpowering drive to move along some specific route, but the door was in the way of it. Ray forgot the open door and headed back down the hall to where he came from, then entered the kitchen. Paula followed closely behind, chastising him as he walked for being so senseless as to enter the dark hallway.

              By now he had convinced himself that the story truly was only that they had pulled at the door repeatedly enough for it to become unstuck, and he forced the idea of an intruder (or rightful owner) having opened the door into a very dark, very jagged and very small corner in the back of his mind.

              “Paula, I promise you,” he said as he fetched a dented bowl from the cabinet and filled it with water in the pathetic little sink, “no one has been here, and no one is here.” Briskly he headed back through the open doorway and plunged back into the darkness of the hall until he met Hitchcock at the end. He set the bowl of water gently down beside the bird.

              “Nobody’s touched our stuff,” he continued. “Nobody’s left any notes, or any ‘GET OUT’ signs, and we haven’t seen anyone in the mangroves.” He gazed worrisomely at Hitchcock for a long moment, and then, figuring there was nothing else he could do on the matter, turned tentatively towards the door left ajar in the hallway.

Paula tapped her foot nervously, following closely behind him still. Through the crack between the door and its frame, Ray could see that the new room was in total darkness. He pushed the door with the flat of his hand, and with an agonizing creak like a dying animal, it yielded to him.

The door opened to a room the size of a closet, and Ray was hit with a blast of musty air that smelled of decaying paper. Lining every wall were large metal file cabinets. They glowed softly as Paula peered into the door, reflecting the faint orange light that escaped her glasses.

“Would you turn on a light or something?” Paula hissed. “I can’t see like you can.”

To his right, there was, as it turned out, a light switch, which he flicked on to illuminate harsh fluorescent lights overhead.

“…Oh,” she said, shoulders lowering from their tense stiffness. “It’s kind of boring.”



“Storage room, I guess,” Ray said. “Worth a look, anyway.”

He picked the bottom drawer of one of the filing cabinets and sat down next to it, pulling it open with a creak. Inside, it was crammed with papers and manila folders and files, and everything was separated by dividers into chunks. He pulled out the first paper of the first section and held it up so that he and Paula could read.

“Are you sure we should be looking through this?” she said.

He snorted. “If we were worried about messing with someone’s stuff, we’ve done way too much damage for anything more to matter.”

Paula crouched next to him (carefully avoiding any part of her clothing touching the black dust on the floor), hands folded neatly on her thighs, and peered at the paper. At the top-left of the page was a low-resolution picture of a middle-aged man. He had black hair that covered his ears and a dark circle beard, and a blank, unreadable expression that somehow still struck Ray as intense. To the side of the picture were a few lines of identifying information. His name was listed as Gary Holbrook.

“I wonder if that’s the writer,” Paula said.


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Ray set the paper down on the dust-ridden floor and rifled through more files. He pulled out the first paper of the next section.

“I don’t think so. Look, this is a totally different person. Could be this guy too.”

This page was of the same format, depicting a woman with blonde hair that cascaded in thick, beautiful waves, and large blue eyes that gazed at the camera severely. She was showing the first signs of entering middle age, but had all the signs of careful attention to her maintenance of a youthful appearance. Her name was Susana Alfonso. The first paper in the next section detailed yet another person, a man with unruly brown and grey hair and wireframe glasses, listed as Francesco Calabretta. He had a long, uneven nose, and a funny sort of guilty twist in his lips. His face was slim, and his eyes looked tired.



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Ray scratched the back of his neck. “Okay, so backtracking more on the this-is-someone’s-house theory. These look like employees.” He tossed the papers behind him and dove back into rifling through the cabinet.

“Eh-eh-eh!” Paula interrupted, lifting her hand in disbelief. “What are you doing?” She snatched the discarded pages off the ground and shoved them back into Ray’s hands. “Either we finish reading them, or you put them back in the cabinet where you found them. If we’re to go through someone’s things, we do it methodically.

Ray gave a shoddy attempt at putting the first page back at the end of the file cabinet, but the cabinet was so crammed with papers that it refused to enter without warping and folding over itself. He ignored the deformation and forced the paper down like someone trying to shove clothes into an overpacked suitcase.

Paula looked like she might explode. She snatched the paper back out from the cabinet and waved the crumpled page in front of Ray’s face. “This? This is putting it back properly in its place?”

She shook her head, irritated, as she surveyed the paper. It was the page about the man with the wireframe glasses and messy hair. She held it up closer to the light to get a better view of the text. Suddenly there was a bright flash where Paula’s fingertips pinched the corner of the paper, and there was a smell of smoke.

Paula!

Ray slammed the paper onto the floor and smothered the tiny flame with the bottom of his awful pink flip-flop. He raised his eyes to meet her luminous gaze and furrowed his brow. “Was that…involuntary?”

Paula’s hand was still frozen mid-air, where it had been holding the corner of the paper.

“Yeah,” she choked out.

“That was fire,” Ray said slowly. “Like an actual flame.”

Paula shrunk into herself. “I didn’t know I could do that,” she said quietly. She eyed Ray. “Sorry.”

“No, you don’t have to apologize, just—be careful. I guess.”

A thorny silence wedged itself between them.

Ray ran a hand through his hair. “How is that even possible…? I mean, I guess that applies to just the heating thing too, but straight-up fire is, like… I don’t know. That’s a step up.”

Paula excused herself, saying she was tired, and rose to leave the room. Ray felt oddly guilty. He took the singed paper in his hands, brushing off the blackened and brittle corner and letting the ashy pieces fall to the floor. He gazed at the man in the photograph.

Thursday, January 2, 2025

Part 1, Chapter 9

 

IX: The Door

 

“Battleship?”

Ray was standing at the doorway of the bedroom, holding up a box of the board game. The box was tattered, and the color had worn off its edges. “Wanna play?”

Paula was in the bedroom, sitting at the desk and writing—she’d found some blank sheets of papers, and had taken to journaling as a form of entertainment. Ray had peeked over her shoulder once as she wrote, and she at once became very angry with him for invading her personal space. He had since tried to nip his curiosity and not read her entries, which took just about all the power of his neurological functioning.

Paula wore her denim jacket over a defiantly clean white shirt, and a pleated pink skirt—all stolen. The shirt was too small, but passed as slim-fitting. Her hair was untangled, and her skin was free from dust or sand. If Ray hadn’t known her and came across her now, he would never have guessed she didn’t come from a nice home. She lifted her head from the paper and furrowed her brow at him.

“Did you…get that from the dumpster?”

He wanted to say no. He wanted to say no so, so badly, because he wanted to play Battleship so, so badly, and didn’t want to risk Paula rejecting it for its second-hand nature.

“Doesn’t matter where I got it. Point is that I have it.” He shook the box, as if trying to entice an animal with a treat. “Battleship?”

Paula let out a long, dramatic sigh. “Fine.”

Beaming, Ray plopped onto the floor and opened the box voraciously.

“No instruction manual, but I think I remember how to play.”

Paula paused and tilted her head. “Yeah, I think I do too.”

They unfolded the two cases and placed their ships onto the pegboards, and the game began (with improvised pieces—one of the ships was missing, and had been replaced in the box with a yellow thumbtack). Ray was losing to Paula, hands folded in urgent analysis and contemplating his neck move when in the corner of his eye, he noticed something dark.

 He peered out through the doorway, and saw Hitchcock standing again before the locked door, staring stiffly ahead. Ray sighed. “Again?”



Paula turned and saw the bird. “Hm. Was he like that this morning before we went for a walk?”

“I don’t know. I don’t think so.”

Ray rose to his feet and crouched next to his bird. He wiggled his fingers in front of Hitchcock’s eyes, but the bird had no reaction. His wings were tucked neatly on either side, and his beak pointed towards the door.

“Hey. Buddy,” he said, poking the bird’s side. “You good?”

Paula picked up a nub of chalk from the little pile on the floor. She stood up to face the chalkboard and drew a steady line connecting “raven” to “locked door”. Maybe they’d written “bird” in the wrong category; maybe Hitchcock had something to do with the Hole, instead of something about their pasts.

“Maybe he belonged to whomever lived here before,” Paula suggested, “and that’s why he likes hanging out in here, and follows people around.”

“You think? A pet raven?” Ray couldn’t help feeling a bit sad; he’d become quite comfortable with the thought that the raven simply liked him, and didn’t want to imagine Hitchcock someday returning to some owner.

“It’s just a guess.”

“Then what’s with the door obsession?”

“I’m not sure.”

Ray offered his hand in front of the bird for him to step up, but Hitchcock remained still. With his other hand he scooped him from behind, and now the bird stood on his palm, still unmoving.

Ray clicked his tongue. “C’mon, little guy… What’s up with you?”

“There’s nothing there, too—it’s just a door,” Paula said.  She tilted her head at the bird. “Maybe he’s just a little stupid.” She gripped the metal door handle and pulled.

The door opened with a heavy groan from its hinges. A blast of warm and stale air rushed over his face, with a faint foul smell.

She stepped back, face pale. “Wasn’t it locked?”

“Did you—put in a code? In the keypad? I wasn’t really paying attention.”

No, I didn’t. Why did it open so easily?” Her breathing quickened, and she ran her finger nervously through the rosy tips of her hair.  “Someone was in here, someone was in here,” she mumbled.

“No,” Ray said. He stood behind her, arms crossed indifferently. “It just got easier to open ’cause I’ve been pulling at it so much.”

Paula turned to him and spoke in a grave voice. “Are you absolutely sure? How can you be absolutely sure?”

“I just am.”

She studied his face. It was stiflingly quiet. Ray wished he could see the expression eyes made under her glasses. But even though it was hidden from his view, somehow her gaze was still strong enough to make him look away.

The truth was that Ray actually wasn’t absolutely sure something else hadn’t opened the door. In fact, Ray had lied to Paula.

Something had unlocked the door.

 

Part 1, Chapter 11

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